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i get it arthur, it is kinda like (very loose analogy here) when people like to watch scary movies, even though it scares them alot. i am kinda like that.

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yeah, it would be hard to wade through all the (cover your eyes now) s*it, to get to the good stuff, like this site.

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that i why i have mostly monet prints and family pics up, i love monet. very soothing, and you don’t have to have great eyesight to apreciate it!

i don’t have many sp posters anymore, but the new ones i’ve been getting are staying in the round cardbord thingys for a while.

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also, superlord, that is what i needed to hear, as much as i needed to hear that arthur loved it. i need someone to tell me to fix this, make that better, otherwise i wouldn’t be able to do my best. and arthur liking it, helps me also, to know that it doesn’t suck ass, there is hope

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she does kinda look like she is gonna jump out and get you, i can see it in her eyes,

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oh, no

i hate that also, big things are comming, and deaths, unfornunatly, but i will not go all tarantino on you. but there will be twists and turns, i have the story in my head, it is just hard getting it out on the paper (so to say).

it will be anything but the same.

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yeah it does, i didn’t notice that before.

hey did you know, well probably not, i have seen tim burton before. i was at my uncles house in burbank, and i was at a softball game for my cousin, and they were dedicating the feild to tim burton’s father. and he was there. i didn’t say hi or anything, but i thought it was kinda cool.

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very cool.

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well, thank you superlord, your critiques are apreciated as well, i was worried about the sentace structure, thank you for bringing that up. revisions are in order. and the imagry, yes good point.

but the overall story idea, does it bring you in?

and i will work on it. please feel free to comment with any more sugestions.

thank you both arthur and superlord, both very helpful!!

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thanks, yeah, i am going for the younger teen crowd, that likes high fantasy. so glad you liked it. a bit releaved really, i was waiting for the bad reviews. i will post more for you to read if you like, this is all i have typed up so far, but as soon as i get more i can post it. thanks for reading it arthur.

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let me know thanks

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ok, i’m back, well, now i am posting the story, the name of it right now is Rednigh Kingdom. it is just a working title. and if you don’t like it, tell me why, and if you think some parts move to slow or are dumb, please tell me. i need feedback. here is what i have so far. (and i don’t wanna hear nothing about the names, i like them and they are staying, it is my little nod to sp)

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i have taken off the story–it is being rewriten now. i will repost once i am happy with it. do not worry if you would like to read this version more go to my blog, by way of the www on my profile!!

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ok, as soon as i get back from getting my son off the bus i will post what i have so far, then you let me know, k?

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well, maybe no name change

me too, i could eat asain food all day! padthai is one of my faves, i love how it is a diffrent spicy!

but back on topic

i would like to see what that sticker says also.

so anyone out there who knows thai, not just the food?

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wow, that is some cool stuff. i have seen some of it on ebay, but i ran out of monies.
glad to see that you can get your hands on it though, looking forward to seeing the scans of that stuff.

i like thai food. (yeah, no reason for that just poped out)

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would be amazing,

and yes, there would be no yelling, none at all.

think they read this stuff?

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wow, i wish i could read that.

more promo’s there, huh, wonder why?

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well in theory it would work, but in reality i don’t think so.

but a few days at arthurs w/ the pumpkins would be awesomeness!

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i like pi, it is good.

i watched the intmate and interactive the other nite, it was good, but d’arcy’s singing was a bit off, she didn’t seem in a good mood for the interview either.

i liked it when they had questions from the audience, and a boy called on the phone, and then him and billy were talking about guitars and such, the lady doing the interview (the host i geuss) kept trying to get them to stop, they talked guitars for like 5 mins before she made them stop.

and someone asked a jimmy question, and billy was upset. but it was not long after the whole incident when they did the show.

but in all i really enjoyed it, and loved all the songs from adore that they played.

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yes, but what ya gonna do??

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yes, they will, but i don’t know if arthur would want us to stay forever. the pumpkins probably, but the rest of us, he would probably get tired of us after a week or two.

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czarina, no scam, education!!!

and we aren’t going to hold them hostage, we will pay them to be there(like a geust speaker at a school, it will just be at arthurs house), but after meeting all of us, they will want ot stay and maybe even give back the money, cause we are so super cool!!

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or like a seminar, yeah a seminar

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i second that!!

so how we gonna make this happen? when do we start the letter writing?

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